Our Wicked Writing!

WALT – Correctly write a simple sentence.

“Get the basics right.”

When we:

-       Start with a Capital Letter

-       End the idea with a Full Stop

-       Use a verb

-       Use a noun

-       Check it makes sense.

WALT – Add detail to a sentence

“Paint a clear picture in the readers head”

When we:

-       Use adjectives

-       Add more information

o    Who?

o    What?

o    How?

o    When?

o    Where?

o    Why?

Me and my friend went to school.                                                                           

Me and my old friend Cody went to Frankton School today.

By Ezekiel

I went for a walk.

I was sweating after a long walk.

By Addison

I ride my bike.

I rode my green bike to the Dairy.

By Levi

The cat sat on the mat.

The fat cat jumped onto the mat.

By Rhubyn

I went for a walk.

I went for a stroll to the playground.

By Ayush

The cat sat on the seat.

The big fluffy ginger cat pounced on the hard couch.

By Mikaire

The cat sat on the mat.

The hairy cat pounced angrily on the enormous mat.

By Kaiya

I went for a run.

I went for a short run with my friend.

By Krista

I sat on the mat

I lay down on the fluffy chair watching the clouds move through the sky.

By Chloe

The cat sat on me.

The big greasy cat leapt up on to the brown table beside me.

By Nicole

In the weekend I watched TV.

On Sunday I watched cartoon network on TV.

By Jordyn

The moon shines.

At the stroke of midnight the half-moon shone brightly.

By Campbell

My cat played with me.

Garfield went to play with the toy marbles I rolled past him.

By Kalani

I went to school.

My Grandpa madly drove me to my rugby game at school.

By Hyrum

The cat sat on the mat.

The black cat jumped like a kitten onto the red chair.

By Mayarni

The cat sat on the mat.

The fat cat sat on the enormous mat.

By Xavaleah

The cat sat on the mat.

The pale black cat sat on the gigantic mat.

By Matariki

I sat on the mat.

Yesterday I lay in the sun on the brown wood floor in the hallway.

By Serena

My bike fell down.

My black bike fell down the stairs.

By Amy

I went to the playground.

I ran to the awesome playground in town.

By Nissi